Saturday, November 14, 2009

Out of the Blue

..this i wrote to get someone out of the blue!
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If you feel like someone which is really not you
hope this small piece will take you out of the blue. :)




life is an unending riddle,

which will always demand more.

at times it makes you feel as if,

you are standing alone on the shore.



this is the time when,

you may long for some one to succour.

to hold your hand and,

take you away from the Shore



dont let the clamorous tides,

take away your glowing enamour.

walk out of it to show that

you can face the furore.



think of good times ahead which

will take you away from everything you abhor

and those joyous feelings

will give you happiness galore!!

9 comments:

Suman W M Sivachar said...

Good one yet again. Simple and would have done its job to cheer the person up. :)

Jayant said...

thanks buddy.. :)! really appreciate your feedback!

Juhi said...

Gud work JK !! Its beautiful. :) I guess evryone wishes for dat one special hand which takes dem away frm d shore of sadness n loneliness forever. Dis poem is filled wid al dat warmth n touch. Love it :) Dis is my favourite one !!

Jayant said...

you understood it really well juhi! Thanks for the appreciation :)

Bakul Warikoo said...

nyc one bhaiya...keep up ur gud wrk..:))

Anonymous said...

hey bhai..!!
great going...beautifully written..!!

Jayant said...

@bakul and ruhi
thanks for the feedback girls! :)

yana said...

nice))))

Jayant said...

Thanks Yana.. :)